I'm glad you've enjoyed reading this. I just saw the prompt for it and gave it a go, I'm always game for going out there and seeing what I can make of a challenge. I mean seriously, I made Rey top Batista. That's how far out I like to wander XD I can appreciate people not wanting to read fics that do nothing for them but I like to read widely to see if the non-smut stuff works for me in pairings that I would never sexually slash.
I'm not a big one for crying men generally but in this JoMo just seemed to be so raw and vulnerable because of the way he'd been exposed to Chris' life and family that it seemed 'right'. By the end its clear that he wants to break up with him but either can't resist Chris or is again manipulated into sex which just makes his ultimate intention even harder for him to handle - if that makes sense!!
I'll quote this from the review I left for sarisynn "I left the end a little bit open ended. They've both told him that they're seeing someone else but I also wanted to leave a tease that they were both leaving Chris for each other. It was subtle but a few people picked up on it on ff :) I'm an evil weevil at times!" I just didn't want the sterotypical ending and thats the way it went. Chris getting his comeuppance.
I do appreciate you taking the time to read outside your comfort zone and thanks again for the kind words and very muchly appreciated review, I'm glad you enjoyed the read :)
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I'm not a big one for crying men generally but in this JoMo just seemed to be so raw and vulnerable because of the way he'd been exposed to Chris' life and family that it seemed 'right'. By the end its clear that he wants to break up with him but either can't resist Chris or is again manipulated into sex which just makes his ultimate intention even harder for him to handle - if that makes sense!!
I'll quote this from the review I left for sarisynn "I left the end a little bit open ended. They've both told him that they're seeing someone else but I also wanted to leave a tease that they were both leaving Chris for each other. It was subtle but a few people picked up on it on ff :) I'm an evil weevil at times!" I just didn't want the sterotypical ending and thats the way it went. Chris getting his comeuppance.
I do appreciate you taking the time to read outside your comfort zone and thanks again for the kind words and very muchly appreciated review, I'm glad you enjoyed the read :)